The chemistry between this couple builds up over time with trust for one another and he find Alana is the virgin bride Alejandro is going to break her his own princesa and she will never want to leave his bed again. Hugo is her personal bodyguard and takes her anywhere she wants to go and she finds herself at a mother and children refuse helping out all she can. Alana Carmichael is going to be his new wife, this may look like a fairy tale wedding but it's one big nightmare for Alana to keep her father out of prison for life she had no choice in this arranged marriage and is whisked away before she even said 'I Do' to the big mansion in the hills of Bel Air this is not how she dreamed of a married life. so recommend this authors booksĪlejandro Montoya is the Fierce King of LA the heir to the corporation. but there is such a good storyline as you will see someone has lied betrayed and deceived this author has accelerated her self on this one such a very talented writer i so cannot wait for book two what a cliffhanger. they become to tolerate each other and so much more and she so gets through the Knickers. Alana is so self -conscious of her figure, but Alejandro loves everything about her body. so she see s a women s shelter and spends her time helping them unbeknown to Alejandro who still thinks she the spoilt princess she helps and befriends a young girl called Lucy. so he fixes her up with the rich ladies fundraising but to them its just a drink day and they not nice. Alana thinks she is marrying the devil himself, she thinks her new home now a prison as she cannot go anywhere without a bodyguard. I normally don’t leave a rating unless I read at least half the book, but the 17% I read was more than enough to know this needs a total makeover… like replace every word other than he, she, it, & and.Īlana is forced in to marriage to Alejandro Montoya ,the heir of Montoya corporation they call him the king of LA she is saving her father from a prison sentence ,Alejandro thinks he is marrying a spoilt and pampered woman he call her princess. Tell me how such a book isn’t even worthy of more than 150 reviews 🤫🤥🤫🤥🤫 Somehow, this is listed as a #1 Kindle best seller. As of today, this book has 1,750 RATINGS for a 3.89 average rating… yet, only 148 of those glowing ratings actually bothered to write a review.

There’d actually have to be something happening here for me to have a damn opinion. They’re civil, respectful, even kind to each other all while internally reminding how much they dislike each other’s sexy asses or shouldn’t (FFS why?) actually give realness to the marriage. While they both internal dialogue how much they dislike the other, there’s 1) no reasoning 2) their actions don’t match. What plot? There isn’t one anywhere in sight by the time I DNF’d at 17%. If not for the words cock and fuck, the dialogue and characters profiles come off as barely YA. His character’s voice and mannerisms sound like the author, not his proposed character. He sounds like a middle-aged woman’s creation of such. He’s what? A big, bad mafia king refined to play the part of a wealthy business man. Her favorite meal is a burger, not a salad. She ditches the faux charity crew of Stepford Wives for an actual needy charity cause. She’s kind enough to play nice with his mom.

Of course, the FMC isn’t the spoiled princess he assumes she is. What if she hated me? What if she was one of those mothers who never thought anyone was good enough for her son? Why the hell did I even care? She hates him.<- It’s equal parts exhausting and boring.Īndddddd….

Shocker, I know, but the FMC is annoying. Reminds me of my coffee, and I don’t want to visualize a woman’s puss and boots in my coffee. Anyhooha, my only issue is the dude referring to the prostitute’s wetness as “cream.” <<<- purely personal, but I f’ing hate that term.

A lot of readers will take issue with safety here, but, it didn’t bother me. He looks, but he decides even he isn’t f’d up enough to fuck some random whore on his wedding night, even if it’s what his wife ain’t putting out. So, (ch3) the MMC abandons his wedding night and finds himself eyeball to puss with a prostitute. meets forced proximity of arranged marriage. Nutshell: She hates him but is hot for him / he hates her but is hot for her. I kind of feel like I stepped into the middle of this book 😬… but it’s not some big mystery, which makes it easy to follow. Starts with an arranged marriage taking place.

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